Monologues

I believe so far the monologues are great, each one is interesting to watch. John's monologue was very simple and funny and I think he did a great job with projecting he's voice and pronouncing the words loud and clear for the audience. He also did a great job with he's staging, he went from one spot to the other with ease while at the same time delivering he's lines well. What I think he should,work on is knowing the audience or rather the other person/people he is talking. Because at some point I didn't know if it was directed to a class or an imaginary audience. So next time he should work on making it clear he who he is talking too.

Jake's performance was also very clear and fun to watch, I like the way he portrayed his character.i also like the fact that he put awkward pauses in between his lines it made it very clear that the character is a shy and socially awkward person. And handing the flower was also very well done. What he should work on is knowing when to look at the audience and when to look at the girl, because I believe the performance would be great if he faced the crowed a little bit more.

My monologue was hard to act at the beginning because the staging directions it was hard to figure out were to stand and how to run of stage but I think I've improved a little in that department. What I should work on is projecting my voice, I sometimes get loud enough but after a couple of lines I get a little quieter. What I'm good at I think, is taking my time deliver my lines. Overall, I think with a bit more work, I can get louder and